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The Spaniards Had a Negative Effect on Aztec Religious Practices

In this summary essay, a student uses a set of readings to explain how the Spaniard conquistadors had a negative effect on the Aztecs’ religious practices. The student discusses how the Aztecs held ceremonies to worship gods such as Huitzilopochtli before being converted to Christianity.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a good job in your body paragraphs of explaining some core aspects of Aztec religion before the Spanish arrived and then discussing how Aztec religious practices changed due to the Spaniards. Your thesis statement would benefit from further revision for clarity, though, and examples of awkward word choices include your use of “between” and “withheld.” Review is needed to ensure that all sentences end with a punctuation mark. Meanwhile, the word “the” should not be capitalized in the middle of a sentence. The possessive form of “Spaniards” is needed in a phrase such as “the Spaniards’ effects.” Your work would look neater overall if you followed a consistent format for all your citations."

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