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The Statue of Athena by Pheidias as a Relic of Ancient Patriarchy

This paper examines the meaning of the statue of Athena, which stood in the Parthenon in Athens.
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Jim's feedback:

"This is clearly written and informative. Your title is capitalized inconsistently. “Protofeminism” can be found hyphenated or not, but it definitely is not written as two words. You should take care to use articles when appropriate. “Femininity” is misspelled in the second paragraph. It could be said that you inappropriately use dashes. If you do use them, as you do in some sentences, you should use an em dash, and include no spaces around it (or one on each side, depending on the style). This is made with a character code on a PC, or by shift-option-dash on a Macintosh. “Paneled” and not “paneled” is used in American English, and similarly, “armor” and not “armour.” Your use of “constricted” is incorrect; I suggest “restricted.” You should write out “fifth.” You write “Parthenos” on the third page. You write a proper name, Pandora, in lowercase more than once. You should avoid unnecessary capitalization, as on the last line of the essay."

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