The Story of How I Adopted My Cat Oliver

This is a descriptive essay about a girl adopting her first cat. The essay contains a lot of details about the cat shelter and the employees at the adoption center as well as a lot of reflection on her state of mind and emotions through the process.

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"What a compelling essay! I was captivated by the story of how you and Oliver came to be and I loved all the details you included! I also enjoyed your descriptions the agency, the employees, and of your bond with Oliver. the only thing that I found missing was a bit more background about you, which would help the reader understand why this was so important. Had you always wanted to get a cat? Was this your first cat ever or did you have a childhood pet? What compelled you adopt at this time in your life? Adding some of these details will help draw the reader in even further :). "

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Kibin. (2024). The story of how i adopted my cat oliver. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-story-of-how-i-adopted-my-cat-oliver-vNV1lDlb

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("The Story of How I Adopted My Cat Oliver.")

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"The Story of How I Adopted My Cat Oliver." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-story-of-how-i-adopted-my-cat-oliver-vNV1lDlb

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"The Story of How I Adopted My Cat Oliver." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-story-of-how-i-adopted-my-cat-oliver-vNV1lDlb.