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Paul Oetinger Rick Thompson WRT 121 She Walks With Angels Few things in our lives will ever prepare us emotionally for the death of a loved one The sadness anger and comfort that fills the heart cannot be imagined It was within the last five minutes of my mothers life that I realized that I was not prepared As I stood on the side of the bed and watched her gasp for precious air my emotions took control My first thoughts became those that were filled with sadness I felt deep sadness and regret and wondered if my mother ever knew how much I idolized her Did I really ever return the love and care that she gave me My eyes saw sadness when looking at the lifeless figure of wrinkled skin that my mother had become This by no means was the same woman who used to wrestle with me and my brothers and beat us all No way could it be the same strong woman that used to play tackle football with me when I was little I remember one time when I was about 8 or 9 years old I came into the house crying My mother asked me what was wrong I told her that my two older brothers were ganging up on me in tackle football She asked the usual mother questions and when she found out that they had chosen the teams as them against me I quickly had a new teammate She grabbed my hand smiling and then we marched outside with her striding like a defensive lineman going up to receive her most valuable trophy award As soon as my brothers saw her come around the corner of the house with my hand in hers they knew that it was a whole new ballgame Now my mother was no giant by any means She was 51 tall and about 140 pounds but on
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