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The Struggles and Triumphs of Helen Keller

This is a brief biography of the life of Helen Keller. The student discusses some of the difficulties she faced as she learned how to interact with the world and explains why her life became such an inspiring story.
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Bob's feedback:

"You really humanize Helen Keller in this paper. You give your reader a good sense of the struggles and joys in her life.

Work on organizing your thoughts into succinct sentences that transition well. There are many run-on sentences that rush ahead with the story and omit some necessary context.

Remember to keep the story in the past tense since these are actual events and not a fictional account.

There are a number of misused words, awkward sentences, and other errors that should be corrected. Dates should not be in parentheses when they are a natural part of the sentence."

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