The Struggles in the Life of Robert Frost as Channeled in His Poems
More essays like this:
This preview is partially blurred. Sign up to view the complete essay.
More essays like this:
"Your writing has a clear purpose which is made apparent by your thorough understanding of the subject matter. You provide the reader with a decent amount of detail that supports your ideas, but sometimes the ideas are not well-developed. Specifically, in the first paragraph, the order that you present the details in does not make sense (e.g., you talk about Frost graduating from college before you say the year he was born). While you provide a lot of quotes to support your ideas, there are a number of times that they are not integrated well because of wording or grammar issues. You created an introduction that compels readers to continue on, but the thesis statement is lacking. Consider being more specific about how turning traumatic events into writing was beneficial for him. Your conclusion summarizes your paper nicely. Your essay is consistently formatted and easy to read but your Works Cited page lacks the same level of consistency. Also, although you did not select a style guide that you were meant to follow, there is an inconsistency in how citations are written. There are a decent number of punctuation, grammar, and spacing issues. While they do not affect the readability of your document, please make sure that they get resolved. Many of the spacing and punctuation issues occur around quotes and citations."
Learn more about this feedback
You know how looking at a math problem similar to the one you're stuck on can help you get unstuck? Reading example essays works the same way!
Here are some ways our essay examples library can help you with your assignment:
- Brainstorm a strong, interesting topic
- Learn what works (and what doesn't) from the reader's perspective. What hooks you? What makes you cringe?
- Uncover new sources by reviewing other students' references and bibliographies
- Inspire new perspectives and arguments (or counterarguments) to address in your own essay
Read our Academic Honor Code for more information on how to use (and how not to use) our library.
Essays may be lightly modified for readability or to protect the anonymity of contributors, but we do not edit essay examples prior to publication. (And nope, we don't source our examples from our editing service! Check out our Privacy and Content Sharing policies for more information.)
The essays in our library are intended to serve as content examples to inspire you as you write your own essay. They're not intended to be submitted as your own work, so we don't waste time removing every error. This allows our team to focus on improving the library and adding new essays.
The example essays in Kibin's library were written by real students for real classes. To protect the anonymity of contributors, we've removed their names and personal information from the essays. When citing an essay from our library, you can use "Kibin" as the author.
Kibin does not guarantee the accuracy, timeliness, or completeness of the essays in the library; essay content should not be construed as advice. For more information on choosing credible sources for your paper, check out this blog post.
Did you find something inaccurate, misleading, abusive, or otherwise problematic in this essay example? Let us know! We'll take a look right away.