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"You write both “townspeople” and “town’s people.” Note that “wellbeing” is one word, and you write “there” instead of “their.” Avoid mixing tenses, and note that you write “Jackson describe” instead of “Jackson describes.” You arbitrarily capitalize “black.” Write concisely. To write, “the lottery has been going for many years, which shows that it is an annual tradition,” is redundant. You fail to include a closing quotation mark, and your final sentence does not make sense. Run a grammar check on your work, and then proofread it carefully. Look for ways to express ideas more simply and directly."
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Kibin. (2024). Symbolism in "the lottery" by shirley jackson. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/symbolism-in-the-lottery-by-shirley-jackson-QaFwUu3B
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