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The Theme of a Journey in the Pixar Movie, Up

This essay shows the relationship of Ellie and Carl from Up and how it can demonstrate the fleeting nature of life. The author provides examples in Carl and Ellie's life to show that they didn't have everything, but they had each other.
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Christina's feedback:

"Good work giving an understanding to the reader about the journey being more important than the destination. You might consider formatting your essay into paragraphs to ensure the reader can distinguish subject from the next. It's easier for the reader to follow your line of thinking when the text is broken up into separate paragraphs. This includes the introduction, three (or more if there are more main points) body paragraphs that will further support each main point, and a conclusion that summarizes your body paragraph and gives a takeaway to the reader. That will strengthen your paper overall. Be sure to resolve any issues of comma usage, sentence structure, word usage, sentence structure, and run-on sentences with a round of proofreading before submitting your work."

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