1. Home

The Theme of Societal Pressures in “Boys and Girls” by Alice Munro

In this reflective essay, a student discusses how people are affected by societal pressures. The student pulls examples from “Boys and Girls” by Alice Munro and his personal experiences.
PAGES
5
WORDS
1,499
  Cite
View Full Essay
About this essay
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley
Generating Preview...
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley

View other essays like this one:

Angela's feedback:

"You provide a thoughtful discussion of how we as individuals are impacted by societal pressures, and your analysis of the short story reflects your understanding of the content. Remember that the title of a short story should be enclosed in quotation marks instead of italicized. In addition, there are a few odd spacing issues throughout the essay, so review is recommended to ensure exactly one space appears between words and after a punctuation mark such as a comma. There are various statements that need additional commas (i.e., a comma pair) to improve the clarity of your writing. Examples include your thesis statement and the sentence that begins “Her values, deviating.” Misspelled terms include “housewive” and “lense,” and the word “Flora” should be capitalized when it is being used as a name."

Learn more about this feedback