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The Themes of Love, Hate, and Fate in Romeo and Juliet and Looking for Alibrandi

This is an analytical essay in which the author delves into the play "Romeo and Juliet" and the movie "Looking for Alibrandi." The author specifically focuses on the themes love, hate, and fate and how the themes tore families apart, brought families together, allowed for relationships to form, led to death, and affected the outcomes of the protagonists.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job writing a neatly formatted essay where the evidence and points are organized in a well thought out manner. You also provided great examples from the text and movie to support your points. Because of how in-depth your introduction and the body of your paper are, the conclusion feels like it is lacking a bit. Consider using the conclusion as an opportunity to summarize all the main points you made in the body of the paper. Also, in terms of organization, make sure that the order in which you present information makes logical sense. Since you mention "Romeo and Juliet" in the introduction first, it would make sense that you would start each paragraph talking about "Romeo and Juliet." There are a few formatting issues scattered throughout the text. Most of these issues revolve around in-text citations that should be placed before the period instead of after. There also appears to be inconsistent spacing between sentences. Last, your fourth paragraph has a large number of grammar errors that are pretty distracting. Either reread the paper yourself or have another pair of eyes read it over to resolve these types of issues."

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