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The Themes Present in Mahmoud Sabbagh's Barakah Meets Barakah

This paper is about Barakah Meets Barakah, a film written and directed by Mahmoud Sabbagh. The author of the essay highlights how the film presents social class, oppression, and gender roles.
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"Your paper is off to an excellent start. The organization is perfect. You have a well-written introduction that ends with a clear thesis statement and a well-written conclusion. This makes it so the purpose of your paper is clearly articulated and shows the reader that you remain focused on the goal throughout your writing. The content is also off to a good start. It is well-organized because your paragraphs align with your thesis statement. I recommend that you work on the wording a bit, though. Remove words such as "I" and add transition words and phrases when introducing new ideas. While the essay is neatly formatted, it is mentioned that it is supposed to be using APA style guidelines, which is not reflected in the body of the paper. The reference page is good, but the heading is incorrect, and there are no in-text citations in the document. Last, overall, you have a good handle on writing conventions. Some grammar and sentence structure errors can be found, so make sure that your paper goes through a round of proofreading to catch these errors."

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