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Torture This is what I thought punishment was when I was seven years old and in the second grade I remember it was an ordinary day when I received a letter home from school notifying my mother about my disruptive behavior in class Now I was never a misbehaved child I just talked and horse-played thats all But of course my mom did not believe my outlook on the situation I would always say the teacher is overreacting and is lying but my mother would respond by saying I am tired of hearing your excuses So my mother came to the conclusion to punish me I really disliked punishments because I felt robbed of my day and I could do the things that I desired to do Although I disliked my punishments they taught me many lessons that have changed me forever It was just an ordinary school day when I had come to the conclusion that I had had enough of taking notes home from Mrs Greens second grade class Like any other day I was having fun laughing and horse playing with my fellow classmates but that is what continuously kept getting me into trouble I could not understand why but for some reason when I began to horse around it led to laughter which forced me to stand out for being too loud Because my laugh tends to be loud I was always the individual who would receive the consequence I believed that this was an act of injustice I felt as if I was given the gift of a malediction of punishment My behavior began to change the second she pronounced my name and punished me with the worst consequence Mrs Green would say Alex you will not be able to participate in recess for a couple of days until your behavior becomes under control do you understand Of course I
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