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The Ultimate Goals of Education

In this personal statement, the student describes their goals as a teacher and the goals of education as a whole.
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Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
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Natalie's feedback:

"It is indeed very important that teachers employ techniques meant to help their students be the best they can be! Overall, you had very few conventional errors, integrated quotations from your sources, and had a good introduction and conclusion. Besides fixing minor spelling/grammatical mistakes, be sure to check an APA style guide, as your in-text citations are not currently formatted correctly. The biggest area needing attention, however, was in terms of focus. I feel as though your essay shifted gears very suddenly, from teaching goals to technology. Incorporating proper transitions could help in this regard. With these fixes, you’ll have a great paper!"

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