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"The basic structure of your essay makes sense, and you provide a lot of compelling information to support your argument concerning renewable energy use in the United States. Addressing formatting and writing convention errors will improve the quality of your work. Regardless of the style guide you're following, maintaining a consistent practice with your parenthetical citations will help your essay look neater overall. At the moment, page numbers are sometimes presented using the abbreviation "pp." Other times they are presented using the abbreviation "pg." Finally, there are situations where no abbreviation is used at all with a page number. Note that "pp." should only be used when referring to multiple pages or a range of page numbers. A single page is typically indicated with "p." There are a number of typos such as "the the" and the use of "patients" instead of "patience" in the work."
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