The Use of Behaviorism in Primary School Language Teaching

This essay reviews the concepts used in a video to teach language in primary schools.

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"This is a good essay that would benefit from shorter paragraphs to aid in reader comprehension. Notice the capitalization of “YouTube.” A video might demonstrate the application of principles, but it does not prove it. To prove implies a high degree of rigor. I am unsure why you place “Duchesne” within asterisks. Assuming this is the maker of the video, you should identify it as such. Single quotation marks should be used only within double quotation marks. You mismatch subject and verb in number, saying the teacher held an active role, which “makes ….” You use a comma splice in the penultimate sentence of the first paragraph. This is the use of a comma to link what should be two sentences. You also run two sentences together with no punctuation whatsoever. Avoid unnecessary capitalization, such as of “total physical response.” Notice also that you define the acronym TPR and then you fail to use it. Define an acronym the first time you use a term, and then use the acronym. Your essay has many grammatical issues. You should always run a grammar check, make recommended corrections, and then read your work and self-edit."

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Kibin. (2025). The use of behaviorism in primary school language teaching. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-use-of-behaviorism-in-primary-school-language-teaching-QeJXg4Af

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("The Use of Behaviorism in Primary School Language Teaching.")

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