The Use of Symbolism in the Short Story, The Fall of the House of Usher by Edgar Allan Poe
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"You have created a focused essay that includes a significant amount of details from the text to support your perspective. Your introduction has a clear thesis statement that guides the rest of the essay. The body of the essay is confusing since the reader is not able to reference the text for context. Consider using quotes from the text and citations to improve the flow of the paper and provide necessary context. Right now, because of the lack of context, it feels like you are bouncing around a lot. There are a number of sentence structure errors that appear in the text. Most of them appear as incomplete sentences. Another thing that is making the text confusing is improper placement of paragraphs. Consider combining related thoughts and ideas into the same paragraph. Another way to reduce confusion in the paper is to include more detail in your introduction about what is going to be covered in the body of the paper and use your conclusion to summarize the main points. "
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