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The Voice Behind the Rain I can hear the rain There is a quiet echo of a voice behind the rain but I cant tell where exactly its coming from Slowly I open my eyes and see my mom with tears in her eyes She is calling my name over and over Anna Anna wake up I begin to look around me now there is shattered glass everywhere and twisted metal The steering wheel is hurting my mom pressed hard against her legs She cant move I somehow manage to untangle myself from my seatbelt and open my door When I move to get out it takes me awhile to remember how to move my legs Stepping out of the car I look around me expecting to see another mangled car with more injured people in it But all I see is a giant brown tree now listing heavily to one side I run over to my moms door and quickly open it Her head is peacefully resting back against her seat Except for the steady line of blood dripping down her cheek she looks beautiful She looks like shes sleeping but shes not Shes dead I drag her out of the car and lay her in the soft cold snow beside the car I dont know what to do I know shes dead and now I dont know what to do So I scream I scream until I have no voice left and then I cry When I stop crying I look up and moms not there anymore There is a man in a yellow jacket there talking to me I cant hear what hes saying I just nod He picks me up and puts me in the back of a big orange and white van He tells me to sit on the blue bench beside a bed There is a long black bag on the bed all zipped up My
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