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Traditional Social Organization of the Swazi People

This informative essay describes the social organization of Swazi (Swati) people, including marriage, polygamy, family arrangements, and the place of clans. The student also discusses gender roles, childhood, and the monarchy of Eswatini.
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Bridget's feedback:

"This is a well-organized and well-written essay that moves logically and clearly through the discussion. The reader is easily able to follow the presentation and focus on the information thanks to polished writing and control over the structure. Some notes include finishing the essay with a conclusion and that "Swazi's" should not be possessive; common usage seems to be "Swazi people" over plural Swazis, but you should check usage in your sources and follow that.

While your information is detailed and presented clearly, two gaps appear. The first is a question of sources, without which the reader cannot determine credibility and ethos. Include either a bibliography or let the reader follow along using in-text citations. The second is a question that relates to purpose: What, exactly, is described in this essay? Is it the reality of life or atemporal description of cultural structures and forms? This may be something to address in the suggested conclusion, discussed above."

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