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As Kalin and I sat in the church conference room we could hear the mumbling of our mothers conversation outside the doorIt didnt matter because neither of us were concerned today was the best day of the year Today was the womens departments holiday bazaar The one time where we could buy all type of crazy christmas presents for our families food baked goods and tons of other things for super low pricesZahri called my momI walked out into the hall to see what she wanted As I approached her she she had a huge smile on her face she saidWanna go see ShayYEAHI was so excited to see my little dog Because we had joint custody I could only see my little girl every other monthOkay be ready in like minuteson the way to Rahshaads house Shays other home and my mom lets me know that this will just be a quick trip because Shay had an appointment for the vetWhen we arrived at the house we rang the bellDINNGGG DOOONGthen there was silence this was strange we rang it againDINNGG DOOONG Shay never barked much or kept up too much noise but the doorbell was he one thing that made her go crazy at the sound of a door bell she would bark howl jump around scratch at the door and all type of other things of that natureBut this day there was just silence Who is it asked a VoiceZahria Shonnie replied my momthe door opened up and standing there was Rashaads mom Mrs Vivian we greeted her with hugs and kissesas we walked in the house Shay realized who we were she ran over to us and jumped on us as she always did my mom sat around with the adults and I played with my dog for a good 30 mins Mrs Vivian called my in the living room where all the adults were sitting and told me
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