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Brandon Weber I open the door entering the confined compound of my blood colored brick duplex on Millwood Drive Behind the rough splintered faded red fence with a crooked elliptical top gate is a parking lot The lot is jaded with bottomless potholes filled with cracked brittle concrete People tread through the poorly maintained lot their bodies exhausted from another stressful workday I could hear them slamming their car doors as if that was their relief for having a bad day Orange rust eats at the white peeling paint on the tainted depreciated car which struggles to start After a few tries the unsympathetic unreliable engine comes alive Its sagging tail pipe erupts a smoggy black polluting smoke The tail pipe is moderately held up by a quick fix bent metal coat hanger Sounds of rackety exhaust and rasping brake pads come from the congested river of traffic which flows through the busy intersection a block away An immense rolling bank of clouds assembles a title wave engulfing the harsh dark blue gray sky above As I set inside the fence a roaring cold wind waters my eyes it elevates dead piles of leaves that clutter the dry brownish yellow grass backyard I see the leaves form a corkscrew tornado shape The tornado uplifts hoary weather faded yellow filtered cigarette butts as it goes along its way The repulsive smell of garbage offended my nostrils coming from an overfilled hideous green leaking trashcan parked in the yard Frail plastic blue cups along with jagged crushed razor sharp fermented beer cans lay among the rubble of the destructive party that degraded my backyard I look back one last time before heading in thinking of the aftermath behind me Part A Positive Description I open the door entering the lively compound of my red rose-colored brick duplex on Millwood Drive Behind the red fence with an elliptical topped gate bordering the yard
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