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We Need to Stop Misusing the Word "Love" before It Loses Its Meaning

This personal essay explores what love means and how this should guide our usage of the word itself. The student uses personal experience with a bad breakup, Jewel's "Always," soap operas, and films (Titanic) to consider how fantasy and reality influence our culture's idea of "love."
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Bridget's feedback:

"The straightforward tone and style of your writing, combined with the frankness of the discussion, is well suited to this reflective piece. Using cultural artifacts to explore the idea deepens the definition of what love is past the individual or personal to effectively create a broader perspective. I would comment that there is a little more work to be done with the overall organization to enhance flow, movement, and control. The last long paragraph may function better as multiple paragraphs for consistency and visual clarity. I recommend doing this and then using a reverse outline technique to investigate other paragraph orders and overall paper structures and see what these do to the argument and ideas."

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