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The Yom Kippur War: Conflicts Between Israel and Arabic Nations

This essay provides information regarding the Yom Kippur War, otherwise known as the Ramadan War and the October War. The author also discusses some effects of this war, such as internal conflict in Israel and using oil as a weapon of war.
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Christina's feedback:

"Your essay does a great job outlining the history of the war, and your introduction sets up the background of the conflict in a concise but informative manner. Nicely done! Your paragraphs are sectioned out well and clearly focused; it's easy to have paragraphs run long when writing about the history of an event. There is a bit of room for expansion when you talk about the effects of the war. This essay would also benefit from a round of editing to ensure any issues of word usage, punctuation, and sentence structure are resolved before submitting your work."

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