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Theories of Intelligence by David Perkins, Raymond Cattell, and Howard Gardner

In this informative essay, a student discusses different theories about intelligence. The student pays particular attention to the ideas of neural and reflective intelligence by David Perkins and crystallized intelligence by Raymond Cattell.
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Angela's feedback:

"You successfully cover a variety of theories on intelligence, but the structure of your essay is somewhat confusing since the order of the theories in the introduction does not reflect the order you follow in your body paragraphs. Instead of using abbreviations for organizations such as ASCD and IAE, it would be better to write the terms out in full since there's a good chance the reader won't be familiar with the abbreviations. This lack of familiarity makes it difficult to judge whether you're using credible sources. The first word after a semicolon should not be capitalized, and your use of semicolons should be revisited. On a related note, you should not copy and paste sentences within your work; it will stand out to the reader that you're not taking the time to rephrase your main points. When you have a parenthetical citation at the end of a statement, the period should be placed after the citation. The placement of opening quotation marks needs to be rechecked, and when using multiple sets of quotation marks, the first set should be double quotation marks while the second set should be single quotation marks. Typically, paper margins are set to one inch all around for academic work."

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