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Hate is a very scary thing and there is much too much of it in the world I am an object of hate because I am a lesbian I had a very scary incident a year ago that will haunt me for the rest of my life I had a girlfriend and we were openly together at school so most students and teachers knew of our sexuality We were the objects of a lot of hate but I had no idea how powerful that hate was until one horrible day My girlfriend two guy friends and I were doing what we did every day after school - walking to our cars to go home The two guys we were with also happened to be gay and youll know why that is important in a moment We were just about at the parking lot when all of a sudden five or six guys surrounded us and began to hit us As they were hitting and kicking they continuously yelled Fg That is one word I will never be able to hear again without shaking We tried to fight back in the beginning without success then we just tried to huddle together to protect each other All I remember thinking was how scared I was for my life and my friends lives The boys were beaten much worse than we were I guess that is one time I was really glad to be a girl I dont think there has ever been a time when I was more afraid I was truly afraid for my life Those kids who beat us never got into any trouble even though there were many people around when it happened No one tried to stop them It was considered okay because we were gay They physically beat the four of us because of who we are Its no wonder so many people are afraid to be themselves
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