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AWESOME When I woke up in the morning I knew that today is the day for meeting my best friend Radar Radar looks absolutely gorgeous His black expressive thoughtful eyes are always slightly sad His moistened nostrils puff up that is usually followed by sniffing He breaths snoring sometimes bearing his healthy teeth as if he were smiling His muscular body with smooth skin his slender tall legs his magnificently shaped head look the picture of health and passion Every single day I look forward to meeting my faithful friend while saving for him his favorite dainties - pieces of sugar Shortly after getting to the race course I head into the half-darkened barn that pleasantly smells of fresh hay mixed with the familiar warm smell of Radar Inside the dark silence I can hear him chewing Suddenly as soon as he hears the grinding of an opening lattice door he raises his head and the rays of the sun running through the small window lights his beautiful head up I embrace his warm neck kiss his soft nose and offer him some sugar He sniffs me round and I feel that he is glad to see me as well Almost all day long we spend together We walk around in the green field strewed with smallspringcolorful flowers The air is filled with smell of the fresh grass I share with him all the news I had gotten up to that time And then finally splitting the air impregnated with spring we rush along across the field into the distance into the perspective into nowhere I feel the power of my reliable friend while holding onto his black mane The speed moving the bodies in time breathing - all of these merge into one indivisible something uncathable like a sweet dream That is the most powerful feeling I have ever experienced There is nothing as exciting as riding a horse I cannot think of
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