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Were supposed to do an essay on a person who has had a positive impact on our lives but that is a big list of people So I decided on 3 people who have all had a contribution on my life Music has always been in my family Ever since I could speak I was probably singing It has come easily to me to read music and play it on the piano or sing in different tones or rhythms Only 3 of the worlds population are musicians but it should be more But the people who my essay is about are my 3 band teachers In grade 7 the teacher responsible for my love of the clarinet was Mr Cesselli He made band so much fun He would totally get into the songs with us He would let us have fun days I guess you could call them Hed play his things on the piano and always be freaking out on the drums But he also had a serious side Yes thats right he had tests What teacher wouldnt But the fact is that they made us know what we had to In grade 8 and 9 Mr Harding was our teacher Yes he was a jerk and band was the class people dreaded even more then math He drilled us on everything and made the class boring He was obviously doing something right if we won gold medals three years in a row Now that Im in grade 10 the teacher is Mr Andrews I know ive only known him for a month or so but hes already had a big impact on my life He makes it so I want to go to band I look forward to when I have that class Doesnt that sound strange a student wanting to go to a class Any ways back to the teacher He makes class
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