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Three Disadvantages of Using a Laptop in Class

In this expository essay, a student talks about three disadvantages associated with using a laptop in class. The student comments on how laptop use in a classroom setting can distract students from learning and weaken their communication skills.
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Angela's feedback:

"You present your essay in a neat and tidy manner, so it is very easy to read through. Moreover, each of your paragraphs has a clear purpose, which facilitates the reader's understanding of your main points. Of your three supporting points, the third one about how using laptops in class can cause students to miss out on information is the weakest. Visually, you can see that this paragraph is the shortest of your body paragraphs. Consider revisiting this point to add more supporting content and analysis. If possible, you should avoid talking about social media since you already address it in your first two body paragraphs. It would also be a good idea to do a thorough edit of your work. While it's possible to understand your intended message in a given statement, your essay has many grammar errors that detract from the flow of your writing. For example, you say "now day's" instead of "nowadays.""

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