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Three Reasons Why Gilgamesh Should Kill Huwawa

In this argumentative essay, the author outlines three reasons why Gilgamesh should kill Huwawa. This essay focuses on Gilgamesh needing to gain back the trust of the city, receive glory, and eliminate a threat.
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Jenn's feedback:

"Your writing has a clear purpose and focuses on a single topic. While you appear to have a good understanding of the topic, there are times where the ideas in your paragraphs get muddled, making it unclear whether you are talking about gaining back trust or eliminating a threat, which seem to go hand-in-hand. You provide some information to support your positions, but more could be included because the first paragraph is lacking support altogether. Some ideas need to be better developed because it is hard to differentiate the difference between gaining back trust and eliminating a threat. Quotes could be better integrated by placing them all in quotation marks. The paper lacks a solid introduction and jumps right into the topic rather than elaborating. You could use the introduction as an opportunity to introduce the title and author of the text and what the purpose of the paper is. The paper ends with a very basic conclusion which repeats what you currently have as an introduction word for word. The conclusion is an opportunity to summarize all of the key points you made throughout the body of the paper. For the most part, your essay is consistently formatted. There is a paragraph that is indented further than the others and some sentences have more spaces after the period than others. Since there are quotes in your paper, there should be citations and a reference section, even if you do not have a specific style guide to follow to avoid plagiarism. Overall, the paper does not have many grammar issues. The ones that exist are typically because of the inclusion of unnecessary words."

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