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Three Ways Young Adults Can Develop Their Self-Awareness

This essay provides an overview of the concept of self-awareness in young adults, and identifies three factors in its development: a balance between work and play, healthy relationships, and mindfulness. The student focuses on everyday behaviors and steps young adults can take to grow in self-awareness.
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Bridget's feedback:

"This is a well-organized and well-argued essay. The structure of the essay is logical and helps guide the reader through the three points you identify as essential to developing self-awareness. You do a good job giving specific explanations for the terms and concepts that show you have mastery of the ideas. I had two general recommendations for this piece. First, I urge you to take advantage of sources to strengthen the discussion. Because you are dealing in abstract concepts, sources (like studies) can really help ground the reader and show your authority. Second, I would recommend reading over your writing for clarity. There were some errors that made certain sentences hard to navigate. These errors can be harder to catch; unlike a misplaced comma or a spelling issue, errors like dangling modifiers or ambiguous phrasing are errors based on where they are in the sentence and how they are being used. So, a deep read is required to proofread for syntax and clarity. You are clearly a strong writer developing good control, so I think this will be a solid next step in the development of your voice and style."

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