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Some things change for the good In term one when I started my timecapsule I thought nothing would change in just few months I thoughtthat I would never be able to write an essay on it Well I was wrongIt is term three and the year is about to finish Although other thanthe new haircut I had few weeks ago there is not much difference in myappearance There is an alteration in my attitude Over the months twoaspects that have changed in me are my fear and viewpointsThe foremost change was that I dont fear the dark I knew it was sillyto fear the dark but I have always been very scared of it In term oneI didnt dare to walk into a dark room all by myself Now I amperfectly fine with the dark I can sleep with the lights off and walkinto a dark room with no safe guards such as my sister beside me Ithas all changed and I honestly think that darkness now fits into the NoFear category Perhaps it was just finding the courage The secretAttending Exult 2011 Retreat a few months ago where I learnt manypositive things One of the highlights was the Healing day Everyone waspraying together for the Holy Spirit to heal their afflictions That daywas a turning point of my year and my life Since that day I feel aspecial light glowing within me The glow of courage gives me strengthto walk into the darkness and conquer my fear The glow of the HolySpirit has increased my faith and a glow of wisdom - to betterunderstand I believe I was healed by the power of the Holy SpiritThe second change has been my outlook My outlook on life is morepositive I am no longer giving up on my English essays and I am proudthat I am still working on them as I have more chances to resubmit workI am optimistic and believe that I will definitely
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