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"You have done a great job introducing yourself and describing your life goals. You present the information in a logical manner that helps the listener follow along. If you read this out loud, you may notice that there are a number of places that sound awkward grammatically. A couple of things that stood out to me were that you provided the names of your dogs but not your wife, that you say "Hi" twice in the introduction, and that I believe that you want to say that you are from a small country off the coast of West Africa. These are just a few examples of things I noticed. I suggest that you send this paper through a round of proofreading to get specific feedback on the various areas of the speech that can use improvement."
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