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Topic Proposal: Costume versus Characters' Transformation in the Film W.E.

This research topic proposal focuses on costuming changes and how they reflect the characters’ transformations in the film “W. E.”
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Christina's feedback:

"You did a good job outlining the focus of your research topic proposal with the reader, and you identified a couple of clear research questions and how you intend to answer them via your research. When it comes to formatting, a suggestion would be to review the formatting guidelines for Chicago style in order to ensure everything is correct as far as the title page, bibliography, and in-text citations, which seem to be missing, despite the number of references you include following the text. If you did indeed consult these sources while writing your proposal, then you must include citations (or footnotes) to clearly identify information sourced from third parties. You would also benefit greatly from a round of proofreading to ensure issues with punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure are resolved."

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