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Taken for a Ride When I think back I remember I would fallow my brother everywhere One day my brother and his friends were going biking I wanted to come along badly Finally he let me come along I was so excited They were all expert bikers I had a hard time keeping up we were biking over hills and it was really hot outside so we stopped for water and ice cream The boys told me to wait outside and watch the bikes while they got their ice cream so I did When the boys started coming back enjoying their ice cream I wanted it to be my turn it looked so delicious They said that it was ok for me to go get mine so I went and choose the mint cream with chocolate chips it was a double scoop I was so excited Then suddenly I looked around and everyone was missing I had no way to pay for the ice cream I told the cashier that I would be right back with the money and I dashed out the door got on my bike and rode off as fast as I could while still managing to eat my ice cream I got to the lake where all the boys were and they were all laughing at me for being so gullible I told them that they got me but I would get them back and I still have not gotten them back
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