scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 316
Ever try something totally new I really havent until last summer Its a typical boring day and as usual Im sitting down being hypnotized by the television Suddenly my moms phone buzzed I was curious who she was talking to After she hung up I hurried into her room Who was that I asked I askedIt was your uncle he wants to take you rock climbing today she explained Rock climbing I thought that was something you did in the mall for funThat sounds super boring I moanedShe frowned Please give it a try your uncle really wants to hang out with you today Im sure you two will have so much funMy Uncles name is Damiaan I dont see him very often except for the holidays Hes into hiking and enjoys taking trips to the mountains My mother called me loudly from the kitchen Tasha Your uncle is here He arrived at our house about noon wearing a green t-shirt and brown shorts He spoke with an excited tone Hey Im so glad I get to hang out with you today You all ready to go I sighed and shook my head I snatched my water bottle from the counter and we hustled out the door The car ride to the climbing gym was awkward and seemed like forever Finally we got there I was nervous and had butterflies in my stomach At the same time the feeling of excitement hit me like a city bus The gym was called Stone Age when we walking in a woman with light brown hair and blue eyes greeted us My uncle got me a pair of strange looking black shoes and I put on a grey harness The first wall had dull colored handles- some large and some small I climbed to the top in less than 3 minutes
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA