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Understanding the Importance of Empathy in the Real World

This is an analyticaal essay in which the author discusses the concept of empathy. The author delves into the lives of an 80-year-old couple who are being evicted from their life-long home. The author discusses how using empathy and giving the couple options is a more appropriate way to handle the situation than just kicking them out.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job explaining what empathy is. You have also done a great job relating empathy to your own life and a couple's dilemma. Since you have not written a clear introduction, it is not clear what the intended goal of your essay is. It also is not clear what video you watched for context or why. Your essay also lacks a conclusion. The conclusion could also help the reader understand the intended goal of the essay. Because of a lack of context, some of your wording and grammar is confusing. When you talk about yourself being the main character it is not clear why. Last, it is important to correct grammar and sentence structure mistakes to improve the readability of the essay."

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