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Updating the War of the Currents for a Green Energy Future

This argumentative essay on the war of the currents takes the position that DC is most effective for future developments that will require transmission across long distances and use of solar and wind energy.
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"Your mastery of the material is clear and the delivery of information, as well as the writing, is very focused and efficient. I do, however, suggest more connective tissue within paragraphs--signposting, transition phrases and words--to guide the reader from sentence to sentence through the discussion, which is very specific and can feel dense. I also suggest proofreading for some awkward phrasing or word choice--this is less about error and more about clarity and precision in communication. Finally, make sure your citations are correctly formatted and double-check formatting in the references, particularly APA-specific use of sentence case in source titles."

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