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Using a Script, Radio Show, or Film to Tell a Story

In this compare and contrast essay, a student discusses the similarities and differences between a script, a radio show, and a film. The student notes the merits of each of these storytelling methods.
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Angela's feedback:

"You make many valid points about the similarities and differences between a script, a radio show, and a film. However, your use of "the" and "a" when referencing these storytelling methods can get confusing because it's unclear to the reader whether you're referring to, for example, a specific film or films in general. If you are ever referencing a specific work, you should introduce it by title to facilitate reader comprehension. Parallel structure is a problem in many statements, and you're often missing the word "and" before the last item in a list. Editing is needed to address errors with missing apostrophes in contractions such as "can't" and typos such as "narroratio." Your essay would be a lot stronger if you broke the work into more paragraphs. For example, your body paragraphs could be organized by storytelling method to help the reader track the various comparisons you make."

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