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Using Slow Fashion and Thrift Stores to Support Sustainable Fashion

In this research paper, a student explores the topic of sustainable fashion. The student describes the importance of encouraging slow fashion trends and supporting thrift stores.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a good job of explaining the value of sustainable fashion and how it can be implemented. In terms of content, the statistics and details you provide regarding the environmental and social ethics of the fashion industry support your arguments well. Overall, you handle writing conventions well, but some confusing sentences remain. For example, the first sentences of both your first and second paragraphs are awkward and should be rephrased for clarity. The sentence that begins “Ways companies can” and the sentence fragment that begins “Passing of their” are also problematic and would benefit from revision. In terms of APA style, the abbreviation “n.d.” for “no date” features a period after each letter, and review is needed to ensure that when a parenthetical citation appears at the end of a statement, a period is placed after the citation. Only the author’s last name is used in an in-text citation. Your bibliography needs additional work to better match APA conventions too. For example, references are typically listed in alphabetical order by the author’s last name, and an author’s name is usually inverted with an initial for the first name: “Rouse, M.” not “Margaret Rouse.”"

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