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"You've done well in identifying the message and specific elements that allow Voltaire to explore those ideas for the reader's benefit. There are a number of issues, however, that act as a barrier to the reader's ability to encounter your argument. The first is that the essay seems to cut off and then repeat, with two slightly different conclusions (the first seems to be incomplete as a paragraph) that also reuse wording from the introductory paragraph. This becomes very confusing, and your first task should be reviewing to make sure the correct text is on the page.
A second issue is in word choice, with awkward or imprecise diction making the meaning of a sentence quite hard to track down. A number of these are in the choice of verbs, so focus on clarity and precision as you revise at the level of word and phrase."
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Kibin. (2024). Candide: voltaire's study of human nature. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/candide-voltaires-study-of-human-nature-xCXBYFZQ
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