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Theres more to being a man that seeing how many phone numbers you can get or who you convince to sleep with you Being a man means bearing responsibility and accepting the consequences for your actions This means the most to me because of my pop Leonard Smith Hes really my little brother and sisters dad but he became mine too My real dad never been much help to me but Pop always has I remember Christmases from my childhood where hed walk in the door Christmas morning with a huge trash bag filled with toys and other Christmas goodies It may not been something that I had asked for but I enjoyed whatever I got just the same Pop taught me skills I would need to survive on my own He taught me patience sensitivity courteousness tolerance and to keep my priorities straight He even calls to surprise and asks Why youre not in class Pop always treated me like I was his son It means a lot to me that he stepped in my life since my biological dad didnt have the money to be there for me Pop was always free to listen to me I could talk to him about my gripes with life and about how my momma had a hard time to adjusting to me getting older My momma is overprotective She always has the best in mind when she makes a decision but sometimes I think she doesnt Pop taught me instead of arguing against what I found unfair under certain circumstances to bear with it and finish That has to be one of the top rules to life Pop always found a way to show me a different way to life things that I havent been exposed to From visits to the YMCA to watching the Olympic Torch bearers jog through Centennial Park Pop showed me that I could have pride in myself and in
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