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When I die The sun was a few hours from setting and the air was cold and crisp I could feel the nippy January weather biting my ears My friends and I arrived at Mt Pilchuck extra early to conquer the treacherous mountain slopes before dark We each had our 4X4 Toyota trucks that we had been working on the previous summer I had just turned 18 exactly four months before the expedition With Jensen Chad and Joel on my tail I led the excursion up the mountain trail An immaculate red sunset was beginning to form on the horizon which we had a wonderful view of because of our position on the mountain We had been struggling the whole day with the loose rocks on the trail We might have been a little scared but the adrenaline rush kept us going I remember looking at my CD player to see what time it was and in a split second I could feel the gravitation pull shift directions I started to see the roof caving in and I could hear the ear-splitting sound of shattering glass After two times of flipping over it occurred to me that I was tumbling down the cliff of the mountain in my truck I was being trapped in a metal encasing that would surely bring me to my death Every few turnovers I would loose touch with the ground only to come crashing down with enough force to crush the rocks beneath me I kept thinking to myself that this wasnt happening and that I was having a bad dream As much as I wanted to believe it I knew this could certainly be the end of my short life I started thinking about my family and friends and about what I would be missing in their lives There is so many things left inexperienced and I could feel the agony of it all It felt like I
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