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Why a Mr. Clean Ad Can Be Construed as Sexist

This is an opinion essay in which the author suggests that a Mr. Clean ad, that targets adult women, is sending a subliminal message that women are objectified and associated with stereotypical roles of cooking and cleaning. The author documents how the ad is clearly sexist and how women will turn a blind eye to the sexism and contribute to the sales of the product.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job conveying your opinion about this Mr. Clean ad. You have presented your thoughts in a clear, concise, and organized manner. I would suggest, for the sake of adding more clarity to the paper, that you include both an introduction and conclusion. The introduction explains to the reader what they are going to be reading about and ends in a thesis statement that outlines the body of the paper. The conclusion is then an opportunity to revisit the thesis statement and summarize the main points made in the paper. While you have a lot of good content, much of it seems as if it needs to be backed up by citations. Any time that you are presenting facts or perspectives that were not originally your own, you should cite a source that supports them. You mentioned that your paper is supposed to be in MLA format, but there are many MLA style conventions that are missing from your text. The most noticeable are the lack of citations, some spacing inconsistencies, and the format of the reference. Last, there are a number of punctuation errors throughout the essay that are leading to some of the text being muddled. Make sure that you are appropriately using commas in order for your text to read more fluidly."

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