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Why All Forms of Animal Testing Should Be Banned

This argumentative essay takes a stance against animal testing. While noting humans and even other animals benefit from lab testing, the student highlights ethical concerns using the concept of animal rights.
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Bridget's feedback:

"As you move into the next draft, your main focus should be organization. In this draft, opinion-based conclusions tend to be presented before the argumentation, source presentation, and analysis have been accomplished, which weakens the structure of the argument and the ethos. Present your thesis briefly in the introduction, and then use the body paragraphs to build toward that idea, which can be given in its more complex form in the conclusion.

Evidence, like sources and quotations, is a major component of persuasiveness. By properly formatting your citations and using signal phrases, the reader's attention can be directed toward the credibility of your sources and your ethos as both the researcher and author."

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