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Why College Athletes Do Not Need Salaries

This is an persuasive essay in which the author argues against the idea of college athletes getting paid a salary. The author provides reasons why paying college athletes salaries is a bad thing and suggests that a monthly stipend might be a good compromise.
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Jenn's feedback:

"This paper is off to a good start. It is clear what side of the issue you're taking, and you provided a number of valid, well-supported points to support your position. Throughout the essay, you do include some statements that could be construed as either opinion or fact. It is important that when arguing a point that you use scholarly evidence to support it. When introducing that evidence, it is not necessary to include both the author's name and the title of their work. Within the body of your paper just include the author's last name and a page or paragraph number where the quote you used can be found. There are a large number of grammatical and punctuation errors throughout the essay. The punctuation errors typically occur where you introduce quotes. In terms of formatting, make sure that all of your text is the same color and font, including your header."

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