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Why Dallas Winston (Dally) in The Outsiders is a Hero

This essay describes why Dallas (Dally) is a hero in The Outsiders. Examples are provided to describe why the seemingly uncaring and mean Dally is actually trustworthy and brave.
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Erin's feedback:

"Your intro and conclusion are great, and your two middle paragraphs are different and interesting - one beginning with a question, and the other a comparison. A little bit more background description is needed for the reader to follow your jump to murdering the Soc. Take a look at comma rules, especially using a comma to separate a nonessential phrase from the main sentence structure. Try to maintain the present tense in describing the plot. In the second paragraph, make sure it is clear who "he" is. I recommend deciding whether you want to call him Dally or Dallas after the intro, and stick to one or the other. You did a good job supporting your thesis with evidence/examples, and you incorporate quotes into your text well."

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