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Why Early College Admission Is Right for Me

In this admissions essay, a student explains why entering college early is a good choice for him. The student talks about his tough mind-set and love of learning.
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Angela's feedback:

"Your answer to the prompt clearly conveys why you're interested in early college admissions, but your writing is very difficult to read through. At the moment, you've got one long run-on sentence. Review is needed to break this sentence into multiple statements. When doing this, remember that the beginning of a new sentence should always be capitalized. Awkward phrases such as "the mind to it" need to be recast for clarity, while phrases such as "really, really" should also be rewritten to reflect a more academic tone. Furthermore, there are typos such as the use of "your" instead of "you're" that need to be addressed."

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