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Why Free Tuition is Wrong for America

This short essay examines some of the drawbacks of free tuition, ultimately arguing that free tuition would not work for America.
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MJ's feedback:

"This is an interesting and relevant topic, and you have made an effort to incorporate reliable sources. Your Works Cited page is also off to a good start, though there are errors both there and with your in-text citations and overall formatting -- for example, every direct quotation needs a page or paragraph number, and entries on your Works Cited page should have a hanging indent. There are also numerous grammatical mistakes, which make it difficult to clearly understand the nuances of your argument; a round of editing would help with this. At times your writing also seems to be first-person and written in an argumentative style, rather than taking a more objective academic approach. Be sure to double-check your assignment instructions to ensure that you are following the requirements with regard to this, as first person ("I" "we") writing may not be permitted."

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