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Grade five was an important year for me It was when I first developed Alopecia I actually never saw any difference in myself until I began to realise I was getting more and more hair on my pillow every time I woke up Grade five was also the year I changed schools I had found those changes extremely hard and found things difficult to deal with But there was one thing that made me happy and her name was Alice By the time I started at my new school almost all my hair was gone Everyone had stared at me as I walked down the corridor watching my every step every movement I hated them for that I hated the silence hated their intent eyes hated their attention which were all for the wrong reasons During those times my mother always reminded me this Sticks and stones would break my bones but words would never hurt me What about silence Silence can be murderous Girls and Boys we have a new student Her name is Alice It was three weeks into school and I had not made one friend Instead I buried myself into my beloved books I had looked up at the teachers introduction and still remember not believing my eyes She was very small and slight but what had left me dumbfounded was her hair The blackness of it the way it shimmered under the light how it bordered her features perfectly and lay softly around her waist Alice was seated in the only spare seat which was next to me She gave me a big smile and I watched her eyes flicker to the top of my head and back again Without missing a beat she introduced herself Hi Im Alice Im James Alice and I became quite good friends She shared my interest of reading and wed often talk about the books weve read She told me
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