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Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard You can have all of the talent in the world but if you dont use it toyour full potential you might lose to someone who has less talent butworks harder I believe that to be a successful person you have to becommitted to it There are exceptional people in the world who are borntalented and dont work hard Sometimes it is discouraging others whoare not born talented However it is important to understand that thosepeople could have done better if they had chosen to work hard It iscrucial to put your best in it to be fully content Dont make excuses that you cant do something because you may not beborn with natural aptitude All you have to do is work hard and beprepared You will be in triumph more often than you think Sometimestalented people downcasts others whereas the hard working people tendto make us feel how good we could be We can focus on effort than ourtalent because effort is in control of us I have always tried to givemy best in academics In my experience people who work hard always winHowever the toughest thing is dedication It is very vital to overcomeprocrastination because it only leads to dissuasion Two years ago I got stressed out because exams were approaching and Iended up overdoing myself I set out a goal of my level of achievementand was fully determined I worked very hard to reach my goal But Iended up getting sick because of taking too much stress over workloadEven though I knew that taking stress and getting sick definitely isntgood during exams I could have done it differently to avoid sicknessHowever everything paid off at the end when I got my report card Thehappiness and satisfaction made me confident for senior years
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