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Why High School Students Should Learn to Save Money

In this scholarship essay, a student describes why they believe all students should learn how to save money. The writer describes skills like maintaining a checkbook, creating a budget, and saving rather than spending.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
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Erin's feedback:

"You chose a great topic and shared some excellent reasons that high school students should learn to save money. Overall, you organized your paper well, but you might consider explaining in more detail *how* a checkbook, budget, etc. helps you save or how other students can learn these skills too. In terms of what still needs work, I would recommend a round of proofreading/editing to correct the grammar, capitalization ("guitar hero"), formatting, and punctuation errors in your essay. They aren't significant enough to make your essay difficult to read, but they will help you make the best impression possible in a scholarship essay."

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